You can read the free version of this chapter in auxiliary volume, where I mention the book in very short.
Okay, the title says this chapter will end this book. I will talk about three things here:
1. Why this book is bland and confusing.
2. About how this book will end.
3. About the next plans of the book.
First of all, I'm really sorry for not uploading anything for a few months; it was my mistake. Which is I'm really sorry.
This was my first book, and if you read the book, you know there are spelling mistakes, the character's personality doesn't stay consistent, and some things appear out of nowhere and then disappear. There are some things that I promised to introduce, but I still haven't done it, and I add way too many characters that it's felt difficult to manage them, and then it's become overwhelming.
So I took a break and decided to write another novel for a change of pace after I got exams. When I decided to return to writing the novel, I read the entire Unlimited Items Shop System. I understand the mistakes, the plot holes, and many unnecessary things I wrote in the novel.
After a few months, without the eyes of the author, I read the novel as a reader, and at first, it seemed interesting, but as the story progressed, it got boring, and when you see plot holes and characters that are supposed to get tortured now become evil, and name mistakes, and things that should happen but didn't was really confusing and boring.
Like Queen of Dark Rigel Kingdom. She was supposed to be getting tortured by the king because the Queen wanted to overthrow the king and become a queen and start women's rule. However, I forgot that, and later in the novel, I wrote that Queen was evil and killed innocent people.
I didn't plan for Morimo, Island Conquering Game, or X, the previous owner of the Unlimited Items Shop System.
I added them as novel progress, which was the biggest mistake. Because there was no plan, as the story progressed, I added more stories without covering past events, which made it even harder for me to write a novel, and it became boring and confusing.
In the beginning, the book is only about Ye Kai, the story protagonist, conquering his sister in laws, mother, and sisters. I had a plan for every single character, but in writing the novel, I got sidetracked and introduced things that destroyed the original story I had in my mind.
So, I decided to end this book.
As for how this book ended, it's a straightforward, generic ending. Ye Kai, the protagonist, wanted to build a castle with all his female harem members, but the Haremura Federation wanted to destroy the Island and Ye Kai.
With his system's help, Ye Kai defeated the Haremura Federation and built castles as he lived with his harem members.
Ye Kai sacrifices his lust system to build protection around the Island where he lives. The protection was powerful enough that no one could harm the Island but also restricted them. Ye Kai and others can't leave the Island, nor can anyone enter the Island.
Ye Kai and his harem members didn't mind this; they were okay with it. Ye Kai and all his harem members and friends got eternal life inside the protection of the Island; as such, they spent their lives in peaceful times.
This is how the story is going to end. Also, Ye Kai saved his third and second mother; he also met his first mother and sisters, Ye Ning and Ye Shuang, and added them to his harem.
Now, that's how I planned the ending of this book, but there is a sequel.
If you read basic psychology, you know that the human mind gets bored with repetition or the same things. So, Ye Kai and his harem members got bored with sex and living together.
It's not like they don't love each other anymore; they still love each other and are willing to stay together, but they also hope to see more unseen things and explore this world.
Ye Kai was also the same; he was also bored with sex, and there were no other fun activities to do. He had a system to buy many videos, animes, and manga, but still, after hundreds of years, he would also get bored.
As such, he and his harem members decided to leave this peaceful Island and explore the outer world.
They encountered a tsunami and a hurricane when they went off the Island together. This made Ye Kai and all the Harme members separated, and a black hole sucked them and sent them very far away from each other.
Ye Kai landed on an unfamiliar island. His system wasn't as overpowered as it was on the Island; he didn't have a clue where his harem members were and how they might be. So he began his journey of finding all his harem members.
At the end of the Unlimited Items Shop System Novel, Ye Kai had many harem members, but in squeal, I'm going to write, will only have 4 to 5 harem members. As for other females, they will be in squeal, but their role will be limited, and they will not be accompanying Ye Kai.
What to expect in squeal?
There is more action, a smart protagonist, more character development, less smut, the adventure of many different places, a quest to travel the world, and finding harem members. Also, Ye Kai has three daughters with no sexual relationship.
When will I upload it? Then It's today. I will start uploading, and the new book name will be Finding My Lovers in Vast World.
When I was on break, I had many ideas about weird traditions, cultures, and places.
The Squeal will be Ye Kai, getting stronger as he explores a different place with different traditions, cultures, festivals, and people.
He will also explore other races, like elves, beast people, cat people, dog people, a country of insects, and many different places, I thought, over the months.
Also, don't worry; this time, I'm not going to add any sudden changes; I have a fully planned route for the novel but not detailed, leaving some flexibility. Also, this time, I learned a lesson; without a proper plan to the end, I'm not going to introduce any new character or place.
Although only 4 or 5 harem members will accompany Ye Kai on his journey, Ye Kai will visit all different places to find all his harem members. It's just only four or five will stay with him until the end; while some choose to travel by themselves to see the world at their own pace, some might decide to stay in one place to learn new things, and some might die. I'm not sure about killing any harem members, and I might kill or not.
So, that's it is.
The Squeal of Unlimited Items Shop System, Finding My Lovers in Vast World. You can find this novel by searching it or checking my profile to see if it's appeared there.
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